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Author: Gannondalf
ASL Info:    38 M Oregon
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Class/Type: Riddle /Misc
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A small little riddle that really kinda makes no sence.
Unless you have read some of my other poems.
This is sort of an intry., of what I have already wrote.
Also the things to come.
Hope you enjoyed really I have to run.


Just a little diddle between you and me.
perhaps caught in the middle.
Or drowned in the sea.
Sometimes things are untold.
Not this time the letters will be bold
However it will be a glimpse of the pass.
Really a part of his story.
So reader beware about Ancient times.
For some of my stories are about friends of mine.
Perhaps gave me inspiration.
To pen,paper also to ryme.
Oh when it is spoken about its no crime.
For I write about what most fear.
The times pass and forgotten.
Maybe the things that still sit and are rotting.
A slow and dangerous decay.
Deal with it for I truly tell you it's on display.
Every time you go to the mirror.
To take a glimpse at what others hear.
Please don't be bitter that's really not my point.
Get a grip on yourself or you will ache in your joints.
I have yet to type about Jealously.
Hmm I can relate.
For there went another part of me.
Right out the gate.
Well that is enough for now.
I humbly thank you dear reader /bow.

Submitted on 2006-04-19 13:21:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  haha.. this was funny.. talk and talk and no work... u moved out saying with a lots of saying and yet managed to convey with expression ...

hehe througly enjoyed it becoz... its just the way i am at times...

make people go blank while the obvious will be right in front of them


| Posted on 2006-05-13 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]
  Riddle me this?????
Riddle me that??????
An answer for an old Tale is what I seak???
To answer a Question with another Question is no answer at all. Untill you peak. YES peak through the door becouse you look in the wrong spot. Yes I can only answer with Questions Yes becouse the Bleak blind corner, Is hideing a freak......................Dark and stagnet he is,.,.,.,.,.,. What, no there is no answer here.

You ask the wrong Questions! The Answer here is Overwelming to another Question. And to that I offer A long blank stair.........................You havent even sanded the surface. Where, How,do,.......... Could I even Start to explain.

There is no begining to the question you ask.
Please,Please,Please Riddle me this and Riddle me that!!!!!

Signed AKA ooononotthatthatguy/your brother Joshua
| Posted on 2006-04-30 00:00:00 | by ooononotthatguy | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked this. and I do think you touch a lot of subjects here like how poeple dwell on their past, how other people are afraid of it, how we bare are souls like you bare you jealousy... Hands down this was one of my favorite writes by you. It was original, it was smooth.

| Posted on 2006-07-23 00:00:00 | by Swanne | [ Reply to This ]

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