I asked God by angeldust

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Submission Name: I asked God dots

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Author:	angeldust
ASL Info:	17/f/tx
Elite Ratio:	2.1 - 171/139/63
Words:	45

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	281
Average Vote:	3.0000
Bytes:	216

Description:
to my grandmother and grandfather... I love yall with all my heart... stay strong monkeys!!! :)

I asked God dots

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I asked God for a flower, he gave me a bouquet
I asked God for a minute, he gave me a day
I asked God for true love, he gave me that too
I asked for an angel and he gave me you.

:D

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  This is absolutely beautiful, Angel! Can I have your permission to make a copy of this and send it to my daughter?
| Posted on 2008-11-15 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  I've unfortuantly read this somewhere, or something very much like it, so either you stole theirs or they stole yours, but if you wrote for your grandparents, I'm on your side.

Beautiful overall...
But I simply despise God.

"I asked for a flower, he gave a bouquet"

No it should go...

"God asked me for a flower and I killed him"

God wouldnt give anyone anything... because he just doesnt do that. It's all a big game to him... the whole thing about giveing life and such, he put his people in hell, which is earth, and he sitting and watching everyone cry for help and he is doing nothing about it.

Lets not get into it,
nice poem though.

necrotic
| Posted on 2007-04-27 00:00:00 | by necrotic | [ Reply to This ]
  Beutifull,I'm not really into sopyness but this wasn't soppy it was just...lovingly written,I wish you had other stuff up to read now...
| Posted on 2007-04-24 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]
  i love thissss :D truly this is so short and simple but its awesomeee.
| Posted on 2007-04-23 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ]
  this is sooo cute seems liek SOMEBODYS in an amazing lust...lucky girl you are. and your definately lucky to have such an amazing talent.

love-always-jen
| Posted on 2006-05-12 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ]
  Lol … so sweet , seems like you have a happy home , good for you , hope it stays like that , god bless your grandparents .
take care
~~drakoniss~~
| Posted on 2006-04-29 00:00:00 | by drakoniss | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow that was sooo sweet. If a guy told me that I would fall straight in love. It is so perfect. As always I love your poems.
Katana
| Posted on 2006-04-19 00:00:00 | by Katana Ryoko | [ Reply to This ]

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