i dont even
have to look
&...i
still get vertigo
off your hooks.
gotta
nibble
small bites...
can i...get next to that...
Timpid flow...
molassess mental
set the stage...
4 your feature presentation.
my attention
held captive...
leave me shackled
inprisoned within
the prisim of your
soliloquy.
what if I...
motion across our great divide.
so...we can form new
elemental poetry patterns.
split the poetic atom.
you can be...
the lion's head
I'll make up the rest
an set ablaze
the page
with the click
of a sword...
Timpid flow...
so profound
it leaves a amborsia taste
in your mouth.
tea spoons...
don't measure up
runneth over my cup.
you stack
the building blocks of my
imagination up
like Hasbro...
to a...fortress,
resting just beneath
a caravan of stars.
now...leggo
& give me some more
concock another
potion of emotions...
dazzle me another riddle of thoughts...
let me once more
gaze upon
your minds maze.
I just want to get to...that...
Timpid flow...
sharing the same space
on the same page.
I'll find...
exotic you...
tropical you...
the Euphrates you...
& windy you too.
what if I... motion across our great divide. so...we can make new elemental poetry patterns. split the poetic atom.
That had to be the stanza that captivated me into this write. Such impact on this one. It had such a unique rhythm....I can see this one coming out with the most relaxing beat behind it showing it support.
You can really give your poetry life.....and that is something that most poets lack.
I hope that you continue to do your poetry. You have mad talent that shouldn't go unseen!
Submission Name: Timpid flow
