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    dots Submission Name: A tale of us.dots
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    Author: liquidsnake
    ASL Info:    18/m/everywhere
    Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 0/2/3
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 612
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 652



    Description:
       i got bored, can't you tell?


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    dotsA tale of us.dots
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    Starless Night
    Neutral cloud of mystery
    Descend upon the sleepy landscape
    For changing pastel's and dark wind
    Will collide tonight

    Invisible gust's
    Daring decent's into the forgotten field
    Whilst dripping with the scent of rain
    Crashing peacefully within the random mist
    Steady beating
    Pressed so close to feel your life
    And we have nothing but each other
    And the silent rain
    Cresting sunrise
    Awake to the glazed world we hath loved
    And O'er the flutter of life
    Your emerald eye's gleam a tale
    Of us




    Submitted on 2006-04-20 15:20:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      really good flow
    | Posted on 2006-04-20 00:00:00 | by i am mouchette | [ Reply to This ]

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