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    dots Submission Name: WTF?dots
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    Author: particularshard
    ASL Info:    23/m/DC
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 1159/1392/363
    Words: 330
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 1378
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2102



    Description:
       Just some random off the dome shit - Full ride to baylor *raisin roof with authority*


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    dotsWTF?dots
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    I stay fine in this time of inevitable decline,
    Just sippin on my wine
    As I contemplate the divine,
    Meanings of this immorality
    And rising crime
    That not only hurts my land but still further fills my mind
    With these vicious -
    Urges to murder suburban Fuhrer bitches
    In their nice new cars -
    They burn like bright blue stars -
    For pushing Mike too far -
    I close the night in the bar
    You see I drink too much
    And then I think too much
    Marinating on foul thoughts
    To sink you in mulch
    You worm food!
    I bring the thunder -just- like storms do
    And give it to you straight like barkeeps give warm Booze
    See I was born true
    So you can't corrupt me or change me
    Seein me cop out
    Is like George Jetson fucking Janey:
    Strictly forbidden.
    So keep laughin like i'm kiddin
    Till your fancy jewels get hocked and your body gets hidden
    Feel the rhythm -
    My rhymes come complete with the beat;
    Just like my crew,
    Used to roll around complete with the heat
    Now little Mickey's hittin' law school paid complete for the seat,
    Meaning I got a full ride -
    This little boy is mammy's pride
    Forever on his people's side -
    And that be all the people who demand Debutantes die
    For every regular guy
    Who kissed the soul fly
    Both here or Iraq -
    Please believe we'll get them back
    When we get onto the attack -
    That means every cop that's black
    Can get hanged for treason -
    'Son tell em why your mad!'
    Just look outside for a reason:
    Shits really gettin bad with
    Poverty and disease and
    Lotsa lyin politicians
    They try to take what we got and rub our nose in What we missin
    See my vision:
    Till we all free my job ain't done:
    Cough up a lung,
    Grab a gun,
    Let's shoot the one -
    WTF?





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