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    dots Submission Name: Your Dimensiondots
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    Author: BabyMissy
    ASL Info:    16-F-MO
    Elite Ratio:    1.56 - 7/45/38
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 600
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 873



    Description:
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    I was listening to Fear Factory when I wrote this.
    and NO it's not to anyone.


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    dotsYour Dimensiondots
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    Back the fuck up
    Step the hell away,
    Do you really want to know
    What all I've got to say?

    Get a chair
    take a seat,
    Let me tell you a story
    Of lies and deceit.

    You live in a world
    where truth is sin,
    lies are told for pleasure
    and fears are kept within.

    That mind of yours
    This torture is right,
    I bet thats what you think
    Each and every night.

    You walk around
    like you own everything you touch
    But really so many things
    Hate you very much

    You speak words
    That tear people apart
    Do you even care?
    Do you even have a heart?

    I gasp when you rise
    and laugh when you fall,
    Just remember this
    I will never respond to your call.




    Submitted on 2006-04-21 18:59:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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