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Submission Name:
Your Dimension
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Author:
BabyMissy
ASL Info:
16-F-MO
Elite Ratio:
1.56 - 7/45/38
Words:
137
Class/Type:
Poetry/Venting
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I was listening to Fear Factory when I wrote this.
and NO it's not to anyone.
Your Dimension
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Back the fuck up
Step the hell away,
Do you really want to know
What all I've got to say?
Get a chair
take a seat,
Let me tell you a story
Of lies and deceit.
You live in a world
where truth is sin,
lies are told for pleasure
and fears are kept within.
That mind of yours
This torture is right,
I bet thats what you think
Each and every night.
You walk around
like you own everything you touch
But really so many things
Hate you very much
You speak words
That tear people apart
Do you even care?
Do you even have a heart?
I gasp when you rise
and laugh when you fall,
Just remember this
I will never respond to your call.
Submitted on 2006-04-21 18:59:55
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