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    Author: blue.eyed.girl
    ASL Info:    17/f/cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 3/7/3
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 951
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 595



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    slash your wrists
    you get your bliss
    you bash your head
    upset about what was said
    scream, cry, yell
    in your head bad thoughts dwell
    you're scared and wild
    you sometimes act like a vulnerable child
    help you refuse to accept
    its hard for you to face that your heart is wrecked
    you're on the wrong track
    and you dont know how to come back
    you're wanting to get out
    you're suicidal, no doubt
    but the question for you as you leave
    is do you know what you're doing to me?




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