The Vampire Analysis

A fool there was and he made his prayer
(Even as you and I!)
To a rag and a bone and a hank of hair
(We called her the woman who did not care),
But the fool he called her his lady fair
(Even as you and I!)

Oh the years we waste and the tears we waste
And the work of our head and hand,
Belong to the woman who did not know
(And now we know that she never could know)
And did not understand.

A fool there was and his goods he spent
(Even as you and I!)
Honor and faith and a sure intent
But a fool must follow his natural bent
(And it wasn't the least what the lady meant),
(Even as you and I!)

Oh the toil we lost and the spoil we lost
And the excellent things we planned,
Belong to the woman who didn't know why
(And now we know she never knew why)
And did not understand.

The fool we stripped to his foolish hide
(Even as you and I!)
Which she might have seen when she threw him aside --
(But it isn't on record the lady tried)
So some of him lived but the most of him died --
(Even as you and I!)

And it isn't the shame and it isn't the blame
That stings like a white hot brand.
It's coming to know that she never knew why
(Seeing at last she could never know why)
And never could understand.

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The poem basically illustrates the basis of the pain after a break-up; it is not the fact that we are breaking up itself that makes our emotions go haywire, but the fact that we realize something we thought as crucial to what constitutes our own identity turns out to be false. The realization that our fictional coherency is indeed that--fictional--is shattering to one's ego.

| Posted on 2009-09-28 | by a guest

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The poem tells the story of a man who gave sincere affection and devotion to a woman who only appreciated his material gifts (his work, toil, goods, etc). The fool is devastated, left half dead (unmanned? incapable of feeling again?) by the experience. It explains that the "fool" was only following his heart, and couldn't be expected to do otherwise, being who he is. It also points out that the fool is no different than the speaker (i.e. "even as you and I" = we can all be fools for love); and that the worst, most hurtful part of the realization one has been used and tossed aside is NOT our shame at being a fool or the blame we direct at the "vampire", but rather the understanding that we have fooled ourselves; we believed what we wanted, and the "vampire" who bleeds us dry cannot be blamed for accepting what she was given, or for not offering something she was incapable of giving. Hence, the "coming to know that she never knew why" ...but that isn't HER fault, any more than it's his fault for "making his prayer" (perhaps wanting her love, not being explicit, but rather just giving things?) to a woman incapable of loving him. In the end, the speaker indicates she COULD never, and never did, understand at all; the worst pain is the realization of having sacrificed everything for the love of someone incapable of loving us back, especially when they never claimed they could.

| Posted on 2009-06-08 | by a guest

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I don't really understand it. This poem has confused me since the first time I've read it. At first, I thought it was a vampire who lost his lover. But now, I am starting to think it was a female who seduced a man and either--literally--half killed him (as in, turning him in to a vampire), or that she broke his heart, hence leaving him half-dead. Either way, I love this poem. Always going to be one of my most favorite.

| Posted on 2009-06-02 | by a guest

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Absolutely not - the woman put him through the wringer, and she was the vampire for leaving half dead after she broke up with him...

| Posted on 2009-05-20 | by a guest

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This poem is very confusing and rips apart the readers mind. A vampire has lost his love and is praying to her remains.

| Posted on 2008-12-17 | by a guest