listen... (III) Analysis

listen

beloved

i dreamedit appeared that you thought toescape me and became a greatlily atilt oninsolentwatersbut i was aware offragrance and i came riding upona horse of porphyryinto thewaters i rode down the redhorse shriekingfrom splinteringfoam caught you clutched you upon mymouth

listen

belovedi dreamedin my dream you haddesire to thwart me and becamea little bird and hidin a tree of tall marblefrom a great way i distinguishedsinging and i cameriding upon a scarlet sunsettrampling the nighteasilyfrom the shocked impossibletower i caughtyou strained youbroke you upon my blood

listenbeloved i dreamedi thought you would have deceivedme and became a star in the kingdomof heaventhrough day and space i saw you closeyour eyesand i came ridingupon a thousand crimson years arched with agonyi reined them in tottering beforethe throne and asthey shied at the automaton moon fromthe transplendant hand of sombre godi picked you

as an apple is picked by the little peasants for their girls

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