His Wife and Baby Analysis

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In the lone place of the leaves,

Where they touch the hanging eaves,

There sprang a spray of joyous song that sounded sweet and sturdy;

And the baby in the bed

Raised the shining of his head,

And pulled the mother's lids apart to wake and watch the birdie.

She kissed lip-dimples sweet,

The red soles of his feet,

The waving palms that patted hers as wind-blown blossoms wander;

He twined her tresses silk

Round his neck as white as milk­

'Now, baby, say what birdie sings upon his green spray yonder.'



'He sings a plenty things­

Just watch him wash his wings!

He says Papa will march to-day with drums home through the city.

Here, birdie, here's my cup.

You drink the milk all up;

I'll kiss you, birdie, now you're washed like baby clean and pretty.'



She rose, she sought the skies

With the twin joys of her eyes;

She sent the strong dove of her soul up through the dawning's glory;

She kissed upon her hand

The glowing golden band

That bound the fine scroll of her life and clasped her simple story.

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